The Forever Night Stand
by Bena Roberts
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A two-hour romance which starts with drama and mayhem!
Sara has her back up against the wall. She is recovering from the side effects of chemotherapy and at her own “cancer free” party, she makes a decision that will change her life forever.
The adventure begins when she leaves her posh lifestyle in Scotland and moves in with her Bollywood loving parents, in West London. Her parents are tragically ashamed of Sara’s actions and her electronic monitor. She decides to make them happy again and considers re-marrying.
Enter Raj, a possible hero who comes with the promise of a huge Indian wedding in Goa!
George, the childhood love of her life who seems to be hanging around every corner. Or should she just go back to her husband? Sara faces the biggest dilemma of her life, after making the colossal mistake of her life. What will she do and whom will she choose?
My Rating:
Favorite Quotes:
“Men are like a chapati. Difficult to cook in the beginning, but after five years you will be slapping them around! Make them your own!” My mother’s inability to make chapati after fifty years not mentioned.
If I were on an airplane the sick bag would have been working overtime, but I wasn’t, both my parents were watching me, so I faked it and giggled.
The volcano in my brain spurted lava.
The DJ put on a popular Indian song and my mom plucked me like a chicken and ushered me onto the dance floor.
Sara, sucked the teeth from Raj’s mouth. Sara searched for his tonsils until Raj went red, I feared I would have to resuscitate him.
The expression on his face was stolen from Salvador Dali.
The hall erupted in clapping and cheers, apart from Raj’s family who became wax works.
My Review:
I am conflicted about how to rate this unusual little tale. Written from a dual POV, the premise was compelling although the writing style was oddly peculiar with incomplete sentences and occasionally skipped about rather erratically without a rational or cohesive flow, like the stream of consciousness or the inner musings of a person with a short attention span and rage disorder. There were considerable instances of razor-sharp humor and clever wit, and other stretches where I felt lost and confused with few clues to what was actually occurring. Yet my interest was snagged and didn’t want to concede to a DNF, as I was curious as to where the story was going to take me. I was satisfied with the conclusion, but damn, I had to work for it.
Author Bio – Bena Roberts
Bena Roberts was a journalist and analyst. Now she prefers the title novelist and romance adventurist. She graduated in England in 1994 and then with a Masters in 1997.
Born in 1973, Bena lived in West London until she was 24. Then she lived and worked in Budapest, Bruges, Prague, Amsterdam, Vienna, Hamburg and Munich. She currently resides in Germany, between Heidelberg and Frankfurt. Although she still refers to London as ‘home.’
Bena successfully created a technology blog which gained funding, had lunch with Steve Ballmer and was ‘top 50 most influential woman in mobile.’ Her blog also won several awards including Metro Best Blog.
Bena has two children, loves small dogs and always writes books with a cup of Earl Grey.
Bena’s favorite literary style is black humor, and she hopes to offer a unique voice in this area. Her books aim to confront the darkest of life experiences, with levity. Most of her writing is heavy hitting yet also entertaining.
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Brilliant review. I hope your next one is a bit of a struggle.
Great review as always. Hope your next read is less hard work.
Bummer, but you presented your criticism in a helpful way.
Oh no, I hate when reading feels like work!
Too bad you didn’t click with the story. Better luck next time!
I’m sorry this one was a bit of a struggle for you – though I’m glad it sort of came together in the end!
Thank-you so much for your review and adding all the quotes! I really appreciate that you took the time. Warm regards, Bena XXX
Great review.
Too bad you had to work for it. The cover is beautiful and the synopsis is promising.
Great review DJ. I am sorry this book was a little bit of a struggle for you, I hope your next read is a much better one. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome post.